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Dissertation Writing

A couple of weeks ago two students who had recently obtained their PhDs and I (I haven’t finished yet-but close) got together and held a workshop/talk on advise about writing the dissertation. The students who were able to attend found it was useful, so I thought I would spend some time writing up the bits of advice that were disseminated to the yet to write. First, I should say some of the advice here will be contradictory, because it comes from different people with different takes. Second, this is advice from recent PhDs, faculty who have been writing and publishing for a while probably have their own thoughts they could add to this discussion, this was mainly about how to transition from having structure (classes and exams) to developing techniques for spending your days writing. Special thanks to Shealeen and Rachel, any mistakes here are mine and please don’t blame them. Finally, any additional advise? Add it to the comments.

  • Get on a ScheduleThis was the most important advise I got. A faculty member told me how she wrote her dissertation in a summer. She said that she spent everyday of the summer in the library from noon till six working. While I am not sure this intense of a schedule is the way to go for everyone, I think getting on a schedule is key. For me I know I work better later, so I gave myself the mornings off to run errands, watch a movie, blog, or do whatever I wanted, but after lunch was work time. I tried to work five to six hours a day. Whatever works for you though. Develop a plan and stick to it, even if it is “eight hours a week.” This will help you to not feel guillty all the time that you are not working, and also get you in a routine. I know that many are in academia to avoid treating life like a job, but treating my dissertation like a job helped me tremendously. I eventually settled on a schedule of working at least five hours two days in a row, taking the third as a break. Sometimes I worked more then this, but this was my minimum.
  • Write, Even if you have nothing to say: Early on I spent time trying to write a whole chapter cleanly, start to finish. I thought I had to write the introduction, then the first section then the second . . .and do this by writing the first chapter then the second. Forget it. Just write. Later in the process I learned that what helped was just to start to write anywhere. I didn’t write the chapters in order (I wrote #3, #1, #4, #2, intro, #5), and the later chapters I didn’t even write within the chapter in order. That is, in a particular chapter I didn’t know exactly what I was going to say but I knew I was going to talk about a particular moment in Lolita or Patchwork Girl, so I just started writing. Sometimes you just have to write to figure out what you want to say. This means that you will probably scrap a lot of your work, or rework it, and you will have to organize it, but this is better than trying to write 50 pages in order from the start. (I know someone who writes everything three times-complete rewrite each time.) Rachel even mentioned that she had a long chapter which she eneded up cutting into scraps and organizing onto a poster board. Me, I like the giant whiteboard, with colored markers, but whatever works. I wrote about this before, when I discovered Scrivener. On a related note, I think blogging helped as it gave me writing to do that was less demanding, a sort of warm-up exercise for the day.
  • Read Other Dissertations: Shealeen mentioned this, and I wish I had though of this sooner in my process. Go to your Graduate Library (or where ever the dissertations are kept) and read some. Particularly read ones that were supervised by your committee, this will give you a sense of the expectations and the genre. Many schools and committees have specific expectations that if you discover early will help you.
  • Read a Book: When I was struggling with what I wanted to write, I read, even if what I read was only tangential to what I was writing. I found that this helped to get me thinking, and often I found inspiration in the strangest of texts.
  • Talk to Your Committee: Set up deadlines, let them know what chapters are arriving when. This will not only help you work to a timeline, but also insure that you are giving them time to work on the material. Giving them a chapter in the middle of grading, or when they have just been given three other chapters by other students, will probably slow down your feedback
  • Editing and Writing are Different: I know a lot of people disagree, but for me this was true. I wrote, global edited, and configured as one step, let the chapter sit for a while, and then returned to it to edit much later.
  • Do Something:If you are tired/exhausted and feel you cannot do any more work for the day, but still have hours left, do something simple: Spell check (surprising how long this process can be for a 40 page document-especially if you are me), run down a reference, format your bibliography. There are many mind numbing steps to the process that you can do even if you feel like never seeing another word about Thoreau (assuming you are writing about Thoreau).
  • Write What You Teach: Under the category of two birds one stone. This goes along with the bit about writing out of order. I was teaching a class, several weeks in fact, on House of Leaves. In my dissertation I have a whole chapter about this book, but it is late in the dissertation. Still when I was teaching it during the week it was easier to write about. I didn’t finish the chapter in those weeks of class, but when I did go back to that chapter over the summer I had some substantial work done, some of it as a result of class discussions. Bonus: Also made me more prepared to teach class.
  • Get Office Space, or go the Library: There is only so much writing one can do in one space. Sometimes shifting venues helps. I was surprised out how just the act of going to the library would help me to get work done.
  • Get Good Tools: Seriously some days you are going to spend six hours or more at a computer screen. It’s worth it to invest in a good/large monitor so you don’t get headaches and eye strain. Writing for that long can be exhausting. Along with this consider different word processing programs, honestly it helped me.
  • Back Up Your Writing: You never know when your computer will decide it doesn’t like you dissertation and delete it (especially if you are running Windows). Back-Up. I kept everything on my home computer, a copy on a flash drive, and a copy on a remote server (you can email yourself a copy of what you are working on occasionally).
  • Get a Life: Do something that has nothing to do with academia. Hang out with people who have no idea what MLA or APA or Chicago Style means. Do something that requires no books, no libraries. For me this was running, but whatever it is, do it.

Or you could just get this book, somehow I think it is not the easy.


12 Responses to “Dissertation Writing”

  1. Gregory Z Says:

    I can’t comment about writing a dissertation, but I do urge you–and anyone else who will listen–to check out the book Publishing in Rhetoric and Composition. Even if you don’t belong to the R/C field, there is one article to read: Robert Boice’s “Work Habits of Productive Scholarly Writers: Insights from Research in Psychology.” Boice spells out successful habits that young and experienced faculty use, the combination of tactics they use, and the behaviors he has encouraged and tested in faculty of years and decades. Plus, he cites his own studies at the back.

    Personally, this article was a revelation. After I read it, and followed some of the suggestions, I submitted my first ever piece to a professional journal–and it has been tentatively accepted (pending editing). I never would have written or submitted without this advice. Now I sound like I’m testifying, but this was truly the most useful academic article I have read relating to professional development in months.

    My apologies for the sprawling sentences, but my advice still stands.

    Read Boice.

  2. Michael Pitkowsky Says:

    Thanks for the good advice. I am taking my last oral exam before I start writing my proposal in a few weeks and am about to enter the sea of dissertation writing.

  3. Michael Pitkowsky Says:

    Regarding your comments about the screen size, I am buying a Macbook or MB Pro in the near future and was wondering if you had any comments about how much of a difference the screen size of a MBP might make. I have looked at both of them in a store, but I was wondering what someone who may have used either for dissertation writing might have to say. Thanks.

  4. dave Says:

    Michael:
    The thing about a laptop is that the screen ends up not in the right position (at least for me), you have to tilt you head down to see rather than have it at eye level. There are several solutions to this: 1. You can buy a laptop stand (this one is expensive, there are cheaper). 2. You can buy an external monitor. I do #2. I have a 12 inch powerbook, and hook a 17 inch external monitor to it at home. When I am out, or in the office I use just the laptop, but for the majority of writing at home I use the external monitor. Having a 17 inch monitor makes a huge difference.

  5. Michael Pitkowsky Says:

    Thanks for the advice.

  6. Writing the thesis... « peregrina historiae Says:

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  7. rmagere Says:

    Ultimately writing a thesis is a very individual experience and effort so advices will only help people so far.
    Two things that helped me where:
    a) Write with pen and paper (at least initially) and not on a computer.
    The main reason is that on a computer it is very easy to change and modify what you have written and the temptation of writing “the perfect sentence/paragraph” can overcome the need to actually write the thesis. With pen and paper corrections are more painful and so rather than going back you are forced to carry on and edit your work at a later date
    b) Change location.
    Writing a thesis is very very very boring: where you are writing doesn’t have to be. Some days it is worth finding the quiet of the library, others the noise of a coffee place (sometimes even just having your notepad while on a golf course)

  8. pollian Says:

    From someone who finished his dissertation in an English department a few years back and has moved half-a-step up the academic ladder, a piece of advice that I wish I had gotten several years ago: a dissertation is not a book. It doesn’t have to be as polished as a book. It doesn’t have to be as far-reaching as a book. It can contain 3 or 4–rather than 6 or 7–chapters. It can contain material that you don’t really think belongs but that you spent so much time researching you can’t bear to part with.

    Above everything else, a dissertation is an exercise designed to do two things: 1) teach you what patterns of thought and activity are required to write a book; 2) provide you with a writing sample for the job market.

  9. Todd Says:

    @Gregory Z: Boice is good stuff. I am reading his “Professors as Writers” as I needed it to give me a jump start after a writing stump. It’s working great. What I like about Boice is that his methods and techniques are based on research, not just an unexamined belief. I look forward to reading his other stuff.

    Great advice on writing the dissertation. Having finished my dissertation about 9 months ago, I can honestly say I did all of these recommendations, except “get a life.” ;-)

  10. dave Says:

    Thanks everyone for adding in your comments. Especially rmagere, for I agree that writing is ultimately an individual process, and each author needs to find her own way. I am intrigued to know that some people still write their dissertations long hand. Someone who recently received a tenure track job at a good institution (he has always atteneded top flight schools) said he found it strange how little the programs he has attended talk about the process of writing. As if “magic goes here” applies, as if writing in the humanities especially is that process which occurs in a dark room of which no one speaks. Anyway I think the more you can hear what others have done, the better equipped you are to discover which one works for you.

  11. eye-of-horus Says:

    the humanities Ph.D. dissertation

    1. be able to put your argumentative structure on the back of a postcard

    2. write from a carefully crafted 25-30 page outline

    3. use the word processor, get good bibliographic software. [no pen and paper!!!]
    4. output is total number of words, not hours spent
    5. write 600 words per day 5 days a week (3,000 words/week; 50,000 words of draft 1 in 3 months)
    6. then, edit / rewrite / add

    7. aim to produce 3-4 publishable chapters
    8. create a publishable chapter? send it in and get it published

    9. no dissertation committee will “dis” you if you’ve already published!

    10. even if you know what you’re talking about expect 8 months of full-time effort to produce a 50,000 word dissertation from outline to bound volumes submitted for committee review.

    current writer has 2 humanities PhDs
    philosophy, the university of virginia
    history of science, cambridge university, england

  12. Rise Says:

    This is really a good list for ABDs (All but dissertation). Sound advice, though for other departments the plan will be a little different (like algorithm development, experimentations etc.) but this list covers the basics and is very very useful.


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